Отправлено: 24.08.06 04:49. Заголовок: Song Translations

A thread for Linda's songs, translated into English. This can help all the English speakers understand Linda's songs a little better.
So, I made some translations for her new songs. If you guys have translations into English, post them. Also, if I have made mistakes... Feel free to correct them :)

White Storm (Russian Song: BELYI SHTORM)

We dance on wires in the sky,
I trust us... It's the road to the heart.
We'll take a breath without words,
We might lose again.

Promise you won't forget,
The white storm, and the white wings.
It's painfully strong,
To me and you.

I'll give you back white snow,
And the sky will be enough for us both.
The world's relief is lost,
Maybe you'll start to believe that we're not powerless.

Promise you won't forget,
The white storm, and the white wings.
It's painfully strong,
To me and you.

We dance on wires in the sky,
I trust us... It's the road to the heart.
We'll take a breath without words,
We'll probably lose again.

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Stigmata (Russian Song: MECHENAYA)

It's far from me to you,
It's not easy to go, or to fly.
Be with me. Be with me.
Something carefully comes over me here.
And the movement in the warm water,
Reminds me of you.

You hold me tight,
And you save me with ease.
We should be kept,
To remain. To remain.

Stigmatized by his fangs!
Powerless games,
Yes, they're powerless!
Stigmatized from what you've taken!
What was with you,
Will be with me!

I'll give your heart, and pain back.
And now we're the same, with you.
It's just me and you who are getting hot,
Your oath stays inside my head,
And doesn't let me forget about you.
It's how much we're still in this...

You hold me tight,
And you save me with ease.
We should be kept,
To remain. To remain.

Stigmatized by his fangs!
Powerless games,
Yes, they're powerless!
Stigmatized from what you've taken!
What was with you,
Will be with me!

It'll remain!

Stigmatized by his fangs!
Powerless games,
Yes, they're powerless!
Stigmatized from what you've taken!
What was with you,
Will be with me!

It's far from me to you,
It's not easy to go, or to fly.
Be with me. Be with me.

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Push Me Into Love (Russian Song: TOLKAI MENYA NA LYUBOV')

It's not important why. It's not important at all.
I'll risk falling asleep. I'll risk it all alone.
A tin coated ring was put on me when I was drowsy.
Your attraction... We'll fly.

The gateway to the sky is closed. We'll turn into the clouds.
Let's change our bodies for 2 strong wings.
It's an unreal flight, and take off for the first time.
What kind of love is this?

Push me into love,
Catch me in the fire.
Swing me from my hands,
Keep me with your words.

Those kisses aren't here, and don't kiss like that.
My weightlessness will lift you up,
It's an unreal flight, and take off for the first time.
What kind of love is this?

I've fallen into snow, and inhaled warmth,
I want to feel with you, but it's so far.
And in the scent of the heat, I stepped to the edge.
What kind of love is this, if there is no you?

Push me into love,
Catch me in the fire.
Swing me from my hands,
Keep me with your words.

Push me into love,
Catch me in the fire.
Swing me from my hands,
Keep me with your words.

Push me into love,
Catch me in the fire.
Swing me from my hands,
Keep me with your words.

(If there is no you...)

Push me into love,
Catch me in the fire.
Swing me from my hands,
Keep me with your words.

(If there is no you...)

Push me into love.
Push me into love.

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I'll Steal (Russian Song: YA UKRADU)

Drink me. Drink my silently.
My smoothness cannot be heard.
I'll come back to you from the clouds,
So easy. Easy...

Drink me if you want,
The smooth surface also cries. I know that you can.
The words aren't needed. It's like love,
And probably...

I'll steal silently and quitely!
I'll hide you inside fresh cherries!
I'll steal you without stopping!
Your love's like fresh blood!

I'll steal silently and quitely!
I'll hide you inside fresh cherries!
I'll steal you without stopping!
Your love's like fresh blood!

The kilometers cannot contain me,
Can't understand in sound answers.
I'll come back to you from the clouds,
So easy. Easy...

I'll steal silently and quitely!
I'll hide you inside fresh cherries!
I'll steal you without stopping!
Your love's like fresh blood!

I'll steal silently and quitely!
I'll hide you inside fresh cherries!
I'll steal you without stopping!
Your love's like fresh blood!

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Sincerity [I'll Fly to You] (Russian Song: OTKROVENNOST' [YA VLETELA V TEBYA] )

It's far and easy from me to you,
Take away the fires. Stop!
I'll believe that it's close by.

Games in the dark. Smart love,
I'll write a letter on glass.
I'll find you close by.

I'll fly to you!
My sincerity is careful.
Impossible... I'll lose the intensity!

I'll fly to you!
My destiny's to choke!
I have coincided with your pain so beautifully...

Ideal captivity has been cut in half,
It won't help. My love,
Will break the stop of the crane. I'll quietly open up.

(x2)
I'll fly to you!
My sincerity is careful.
Impossible... I'll lose the intensity!

I'll fly to you!
My destiny's to choke!
I have coincided with your pain so beautifully...

 Отправлено: 24.08.06 10:18. Заголовок: Re:

Freddy It is remarkable
Thanks

 Отправлено: 24.08.06 12:16. Заголовок: Re:

Freddy

Сool! Thank's

 Отправлено: 25.08.06 17:37. Заголовок: Re:

That's realy syperb!

 Отправлено: 26.08.06 11:10. Заголовок: Re:

Oh, that's great!!!!!
Thank U!!!!!!!!!!!

I was going to translate this songs, but had no time. But now my dream came true))))))))))))))))))))))

Respect!!!

 Отправлено: 26.08.06 16:21. Заголовок: Re:

Freddy, thank you! good job!!! I hope it conveys the emotions.

 Отправлено: 26.08.06 21:12. Заголовок: Re:

Thanks everyone :)

Yurik пишет:

цитата:

I hope it conveys the emotions.

,
Yes, it does! :)
Especially "Mechenaya."

 Отправлено: 29.08.06 23:29. Заголовок: Re:

Freddy
That was brilliant. So wonderfull in english!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank u !

 Отправлено: 30.08.06 13:40. Заголовок: Re:

Freddy
i think we must tell "Marked"... instead of "Stigmata"

Marked

From you, from you towards me is too far.
It's not easy to run but you are
Be with me, to be with me...

There is here something careful oppresses me
'Cause my powerless motions you've seen.
It reminds you of me.

You need hold me so greatly
And you can save me gently.
We have to hold us out
And throw down our load.

Marked by his
Sharp canine teeth.
Powerless play
Is terrible way.
He's marked in play,
I'm marked poor prey.
He finds fun in me
Without my lee...

 Отправлено: 30.08.06 13:47. Заголовок: Re:

Alien
там в первой строчке нада не ДО ТЕБЯ, а у тя переведено как "ми", от меня до меня -_-

 Отправлено: 30.08.06 13:50. Заголовок: Re:

Azuki
мне так больше нравится

 Отправлено: 30.08.06 16:21. Заголовок: Re:

oh...funny transletors))
You did the greatest job Freddy!
COOL!

 Отправлено: 30.08.06 19:34. Заголовок: Re:

Azuki
Молодец! Ритмично перевёл!

 Отправлено: 30.08.06 23:54. Заголовок: Re:

Alien,
I see where you're coming from. I just put "Stigmata" (or Stigmatized) because it means pretty much the same thing in English, and sounds more dramatic. Plus, I remember reading somewhere that the video for "Mechenaya" was going to be filmed in a Church, so I just thought it fit. Or maybe the article about it being filmed in a Church wasn't true? Anyone know?

МИГ БОЛИ,
Спасибо!

 Отправлено: 31.08.06 10:57. Заголовок: Re:

Freddy пишет:

цитата:

Or maybe the article about it being filmed in a Church wasn't true? Anyone know?

As I know, not in Church, but in Castle

 Отправлено: 01.09.06 14:08. Заголовок: Re:

Freddy

)))I think you understood that my English is BAD)))

 Отправлено: 01.09.06 20:03. Заголовок: Re:

pn,
Thanks for the information!

МИГ БОЛИ,
Not really... As usual, I'm shocked by this forums level of English :) The way I figure it... If I can understand it, it's good English! And I can understand all you guys

 Отправлено: 02.09.06 10:36. Заголовок: Re:

Freddy
oo thenks a LOT)))
или как там)))

 Отправлено: 10.09.06 16:10. Заголовок: Re:

Freddy
That's cool,cool and cool!It real English!Thanks,our american friend!

 Отправлено: 10.09.06 21:37. Заголовок: Re:

fly пишет:

цитата:

That's cool,cool and cool!It real English!Thanks,our american friend!

Thanks fly, nice to meet you!

 Отправлено: 10.09.06 23:58. Заголовок: Re:

O my GOD!!

 Отправлено: 13.09.06 12:37. Заголовок: Re:

Freddy
I 2!:)))))

 Отправлено: 26.09.06 08:28. Заголовок: Re:

Once upon a time i make translate of once of my favorite song from Linda's Album. It is song "Northern Wind" (SEVERNYI VETER). But text was deformered in some place. It was made for rhythm. Reading:

Look at me and, please, make some steps
There, where we, and where we were not.
Kiss my hand and than, please, take it
And also look, that you and I have done.

Someone could, some in any way
Cannot rise, when he was only it.
Someone could, and someone could not,
When he has had trouble and loneliness.

Nothern wind.
Nothern wind.
Nothern wind.
Nothern wind.

World has risen on knees,
Has risen on knees.
After impact
This world.

Thaws under snow,
Thaws under snow,
Cries by rains -
It weak world.

 Отправлено: 26.09.06 09:33. Заголовок: Re:

Prince,

Excellent! That is one of my favorite songs too. I like your translation!

Here are some old ones from me that I wrote about 2 years ago or so:

"Agony" (Агония)

So bright, inside this stream on fire.
Don't come too close to me,
Or else you might just see...
Movements, in the stream of our flames,
That are too hot to tame.
So don't you play with me.

(Chorus/Refrain)
It's agony, this fire in me.
Together, we'll play in the flames.
It's agony, this fire in me.
Together, in flames.

Flying up in the air right now.
I'm pulling you to me,
And then we'll fall gently.
Arguments. Always and again.
Almost too much to tend.
And I can help you mend.

(Chorus/Refrain)

Look now, how much the tables turned.
In time, you might get burned.
Here. There. And everywhere.
Love and some shame have mixed to one.
Take my hand, and we'll go
Into the flames as one.

"Feats" (Подвиги)

Look and see, under me.
Brave new feats, time to flee.
There’s my hope, and my voice.
And I know, it’s my choice.
Under clouds, under sky’s.
Not with you, close your eyes.
Simple hurts, simple pains.
Dropping fast, like the rains!

Now! To the sun I sing, sky’s I sing.
I! Will not look at you, it might sting.
Now! To the sun I sing, sky’s I sing.
I! Will not look at you, it might sting.

I! Will not look at you, it might sting.

You feel sad, you might tear.
Take your pain, let it sear.
So now I’m, on my own.
My journey, will be shown.
Don’t find me, who now try’s?
Only you, don’t ask why.
Stay away, stay inside.
No one left, to confide... Cause!

Now! To the sun I sing, sky’s I sing!
I! Will not look at you, it might sting!
Now! To the sun I sing, sky’s I sing!
I! Will not look at you, it might sting!

Look and see, under me.
Brave new tasks, time to be.
All alone, in the cold.
Nothing left, to be sold.
Under clouds, under sky’s.
Not with you, close your eyes.
Your own laws, all now slain.
Dropping fast, like the rains!

Now! To the sun I sing, sky’s I sing.
I! Will not look at you, it might sting.
Now! To the sun I sing, sky’s I sing.
I! Will not look at you, it might sting.

"Northern Wind" (Северный ветер )

With your eyes, look up to the sky.
And with your eyes, look where worlds used to lie.
With a kiss, and sealed by the hand.
It was a plan, but now it fails to stand.

(Ah ah ahh, ah ahh, ah ahh...)

Someone woke, when someone just slept.
And someone spoke, of thoughts that hold no depth.
Someone sleeps, when someone could not.
They’re holding thought, of life’s uneasy plots.

Northern winds. Northern winds.
Northern winds. Northern winds.

Worlds, kneel down before it. Kneel down before it.
And cry after the... Impact.
Worlds, drown under the clouds. Drown under the clouds.
And taste the feel of.. A weak rain.

With your eyes, look up to the sky.
And with your eyes, look where worlds used to lie.
With a kiss, and sealed by the hand.
It was a plan, but now it fails to stand.

Northern winds. Northern winds.
Northern winds. Northern winds.

Worlds, kneel down before it. Kneel down before it.
And cry after the... Impact.
Worlds, drown under the clouds. Drown under the clouds.
And taste the feel of.. A weak rain.
Worlds, kneel down before it. Kneel down before it.
And cry after the... Impact.
Worlds, drown under the clouds. Drown under the clouds.
And taste the feel of.. A weak rain.

(Ah ah ahh, ah ahh, ah ahh...)

"Forever_Never" (Никогда)

Never sleep, with no one else but you.
And these words, only you and the wind,
Know where I'll be now...
Forever, forever.

Look at us, we're not the same anymore.
Don't forget now, that I have wings to fly...
From here till everywhere...
From now till, forever.

Say my name, say that you're gone till it's dawn.
Take the blame, and stay on your new road.
I know that we must go,
For many years again.

All these days, all these times that I dreamt.
All these times, I thought it might have meant.
I feel the ocean breeze...
On my palms, forever.

 Отправлено: 27.09.06 19:34. Заголовок: Re:

Freddy пишет:

цитата:

Stigmatized by his fangs! Powerless games, Yes, they're powerless! Stigmatized from what you've taken! What was with you, Will be with me!

that is correct translate of firs chorus:

Stigmatized by his fangs!
Powerless games,
Powerless food!
Stigmatized from what you've taken!
What was with you,
Will be with me!

Stigmatized by his fangs!
Powerless games,
Powerless food!
Stigmatized from what you've taken!
You look on me with love,
Like Powerless games!

 Отправлено: 27.09.06 19:37. Заголовок: Re:

А тут есть хоть один реальный иностранец? ато гляжу все чето на инглише трепятся.. бгг

 Отправлено: 27.09.06 19:46. Заголовок: Re:

Freddy пишет:

цитата:

It's agony, this fire in me. Together, we'll play in the flames. It's agony, this fire in me. Together, in flames.

in original english version of Agony she sing:

Just agony, fire and me.
With fire we play, just us two.
Just agony, fire and me.
With fire us two...

just agony (demo)

 Отправлено: 29.09.06 08:17. Заголовок: Re:

Noa,
Yes I've heard that. And do you (or anyone) know who the vocal coach was for the song in English? I'm curious to find out.

 Отправлено: 29.09.06 15:17. Заголовок: Re:

Freddy

yes, vocal in English - It's a big problem

 Отправлено: 07.10.06 21:11. Заголовок: Re:

Noa пишет:

цитата:

Powerless food!

There is probably some misunderstanding. The original is "бессильное ДА", not "бессильна еда". So Freddy's translation is very much better. In my humble opinion, of course.

Freddy

Thanks a lot! You've done a really good job! Though I don't think it was much of a JOB for you Where do you come from? You are English speaking, aren't you?..

 Отправлено: 08.10.06 05:05. Заголовок: Re:

sima,

Hi and thanks!

Yes, English is my first language. I'm from the USA (Los Angeles.) Nice to meet you!